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Cahos was roming around all over the island. Tyler just pwnd Chris. Lindsay was being restrand when all she wanted was to see what hapend to her future husband.

"...chris...Chris...Chris..." Trent said as he tried to wake him up. The name Chris romed around the dark state of Chris's mind. Just then, Duncan noticed his lips moving. "Look!" he said as everybody in the tent noticed. "I think he's trying to say something!" Geoff said. "Well say it, dude." Harold said hoping thaat his words were heard. Chris said, in a raspy voice, "Am..I still pretty?" Everyone chuckled. "Welcome back to tthe real world, man." Chef said as he padded Chris's back. Chris tried to get up and siad "Oh man, what happend?" "You mean you don't remember?" Justin said. "No, I don't. All I remember is Tyler coming at me and..."Chris took a long pause. "Oh God!" He tried leaving the tent until Chef restraiend him "Where's Lindsay? Is she okay? I need to see my wife!" "It's okay, dude." Duncan said. "We've got our girls hangin out with her." Chris took in a deep breath. "I can't stay in here all day! I've gotto see her now!" "Woah, Chris, man, you can't go anywhere now. Your in bad shape." Chef said as he tried to tell Chris. "I don't care, I have to see her!" Chris said with a fury in his eyes. "Okay, but I warned you." Chef said as he backed up.

Meanwhile, with the girls, the cabin the girls had Lindsay in became filled with screaming, fists flying into the air, and pleases to see Chip, I mean Chris." Let me go, I wanna see Chris!!" Linddsay said as she tried her best to break away from the hold of girls. "He's busy at the moment!" Gwen said, pulling on Lindsay's hair. "OWWW!! That hurts!" Lindsay said. "Why are we even doing this?" Heather said while pulling on Lindsay's arms."Maybe because he'll probely include us in his will." Countney said "In that case, keep holding her down." The moment Lindsay heard that, she instently tried to go after Courtney "Don't say that about Chip, you skank!" No matter how hard she tried, she couldn't break free of the hold she was in.Bridgett said to herself" Were's Justin when we need him?" Just then, the fighting came to a stop. Lindsay gave up on trying. Her baby blue eyes lit up with small tears. "All I wanna do is see Chip. Just let me go." "We can't do that. Chip said you have to stay with us." Bridgett said backed up. Lindsay then stopped and started to cry all because of her saftey. "We're sorry, Lindsay." Lindsay crawledinto aa ball and started crying as she said "Let me see Chip, let me see Chip, let me see Chip..." The girls backed up and let Lindsay have her moment.

Meanwhile, at the tent, Chris set one of his feet on the ground. He like the way it felt on his end. He then placed the rest of the wieght from his leg on to his foot."That was easy, now for the other one." Chris said looking at how he was doing. He then set his other leg on to the ground and fell screaming "Oh God! It feelslike somebody sawed my leg off. Ahhh!!" "Somebody help me get him up" Harold said. "No, it's okay. I'll be fine for now. Oh, hand me that crucht over there, Harold." "Here ya go.""Thanks. Now to go see my future wife." The guys hudled into a little group." Think he'll make it to the cabin? Yeah. Think he'll propose? No." "Five bucks says he does!" Duncan said"Your on!!" Geoff said, getting is waltet out."Ten bucks!!" Chef said. Harlod pulled out a hat and said" All right, step right up! Place your bets and see who will win!"

Chris stuggled on his broken leg on order to get to the cabin to find his wife. "Oh, where could she be?" Chris said to himself.He then enterd where all the cabins were and , not wanting to be an idiot, searced the area looking where his future wife was. Instead of knocking on ever cabin he saw, he looked throu the screen doors and windows.At the lasst screen he looked into, he saw a group of pepole hudled in a,well a group. He then opened the door and found the girls that hudled Lindsay out of the cafetieria. Chris knelt down on his broken knee to see how she was. She was still in a state of shock and  tramatized. Chris then stared at the girls and shouted "What did you do to her?!? Why is she like this?!?" "She's only like this because you wanted her to be safe!" Heather said with a rahsinal explenation. "She's been like this for 20 minutes now and still wating for you." Just then, Lindsay moved to see what was going on. She had broken out of her "trance". With a whisper, she went "Chip, is that you?" Chris turned his head and saw her beautiful face, and baby blue eyes filled with tears.

Chris dropped his crutch and kelt down to hug her. No matter how much pain jolted up his leg, he could bear it. "I'm okay, Lindsay. I'm right here." Chris said as he wrapped his bandaged arms around her. "I'm so glad your okay. I thought Taylor killed you!" Lindsay said, grasping on to the back of his shirt. They then stopped and locked lips together and knew that the consquences they would face together. But that didn't matter to ehiter to them. They were in love, and they knew that they would be in for things that that had never happend before on thire life. They were going to be together, even if it's worth the heartache.
Part 6, the last part to my first take here on DA. Comment and wait for new stories.
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Layzap Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
It was great and it have a cute ending. There's few misspelling but it's still great. :)
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Blackjack2099 Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2011
Sorry about that.
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Layzap Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
That's okay. Many people makes mistakes.
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Blackjack2099 Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2011
And uslally, I never do. And speaking of mistakes, I forgot what ever happend to Tyler! Oops!!
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TDI-TrueDarkChris-07 Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2011  Student Writer
It was great. Now I wonder what are they going to do with Tyler.
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Blackjack2099 Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2011
Oh, God! I knew I was forgeting something! I'll get to it later. When I'm not busy(I am all the time, so never. Maybe in the Wedding story.)
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TDI-TrueDarkChris-07 Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2011  Student Writer
Alright.
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Blackjack2099 Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2011
Till then, I'm working om my cover story for a ChrisxTrent or ChrisXSunny story.
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TDI-TrueDarkChris-07 Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2011  Student Writer
Chris/Trent! Everybody loves yaoi!
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Blackjack2099 Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2011
What's "Yaoi"? I've never heard of that before.
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